OUGD503: Studio brief 1 - Effect Crit

In groups of six, we paired up and critiqued another pairs work, my work was looked at by Kirsty and Danielle.

Here are the boards which I presented:

Here is the feedback which I received from them:

> Think about your audience, is it going to be aimed at all university students, or maybe just art students, or music students?

> Check your boards are relevant, you have two boards that are very similar, maybe get rid of one and make one more of an impact.

> Think about mocking up onto other things rather than just bus stops. Billboards, side of buses?

> Think about colour, why red green yellow and blue? maybe keep it all red like the effect logo?

> Maybe you could have spillage an actual liquid, rather than an illustrator, but this depends on whether you can pull it off in photoshop.

> On your boards, more text to explain what it is.

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