In the session we were asked to present our boards to a small group in the class.
Research boards
Feedback:
> Image is pixelated.
> Stretch the image so it hits the edge of the page.
> Include board numbers?
Feedback:
> Line up your images
> Get rid of the hyphenation
> Too much text
Feedback:
> Image is pixelated.
> Stop waffling
Feedback:
> Align images
> Too much text
> Strange layout, try rearranging
Feedback:
> Far too much writing
> Board numbers
> Bol body copy is a bit intense
Website boards
Feedback:
> Poor image quality, can't see the scamps.
> Is this board necessary
> Align images
Feedback:
> There's no layout choice being used
> Don't repeat yourself
> Check Punctuation
Feedback:
> Bad quality images
> What colour scheme/ fonts did you use?
> No text explaining what you did, and what you're showing.
Feedback:
> Who's in the images?
> Bullet points maybe?
Print and web boards
Feedback:
> This board is not needed
Feedback:
> No layout
> No text explaining what is going on
Feedback:
> Layout!
> Too much text
> Spelling mistakes
Feedback:
> Too much text
> Why have you included your brief on your design boards
Feedback:
> Don't write in first person!
> Typos
> Too much text
Print boards
Feedback:
> Don't abbreviate
> Needs layout to make it clear
> Spelling mistakes
Feedback:
> Poor image quality
Feedback:
> No alignment
> Hardly any text
> Nice pictures
Feedback:
> No layout again
From the feedback I understand that I need to sort out my alignment and layout to make it more professional. I also need to improve the images quality and use less text. Also I shouldn't include research and my brief in the design boards.
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