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> You could include a 'rock' that is from the moon. As a 7-11 year old, I would have loved receiving a piece of the moon.
> How are you going to advertise your product? Where are you going to advertise it? on T.V.?
> Really cool idea, would have loved to take part in this as a child.
> Idea above is excellent, owning a piece of the moon would be awesome at around 6 years old.
> I'm rather confused about whether it is an event or pack given to teachers. Way finding wouldn't be necessary if it happened at school.
> If it's a moon day maybe create tickets for them to go to a space centre or planetarium. Could also include fun stuff including moon games & quizzes, names of films and TV shows about the moon etc.
> You could include a vile of cyanide because I hear they found that on mars or they found out that it could survive there, or some rocket fuel.
> Illustration style is brilliant - very relevant to the target audience!
> Create advertisement to help give context to the days events, pack and its application.
> Illustrations and typography is friendly and really appropriate to target audience. Include tickets to the nearest space
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